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Got it From GrannyPrompted to write about familyGot it From Granny by ~MzVPain

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I wrote this poem as a teaser for my book, to build interest, I arranged the words in the face of my favorite Wildcat. I have typed the words so you may follow the picture...

Souls Attention!
Give me the time
Spooned From my Spirit
Fed to your mind
One woman's experience
Everyone's struggle
Trying to break ground
Everyone's struggle
Here and now in words
They do more than rhyme
More love than hate,
More soul than body
Feel my pain
Through Verse We break Free
Embark On this journey
I'll Get the door
I Am Poet
Hear Me Roar
(the book is ISBN 978-1-4259-0540-8)Back Cover Art-Hear Me Roar by ~MzVPain

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by ~MzVPain, Jan 15, 2013, 12:09:45 PM
Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Visual & Found Poetry

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EchelonEchelon, a level of responsibility or authority in a hierarchy

There's a war on you. There's a war on me
Open your eyes. Can't you really see
World War 3 is coming up. We'll see fire in the sky
Nuclear holocaust. I hope you don't die

Watch people run away. Watch people fall down
See them all cry. Look at their miserable frown
World War 3 is coming up. History repeats itself
Detention camps. Watch your health

Infidels, power lines. Gas prices, parking fines
Car bombs, lost lives. A lost cause make baby cries
World War 3 is coming up. Bush's terror reigns
Corrupt power. Everything's dead ends

Join me, Break free
Rob the poor, slauEchelon by ~s6i6c6k

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Silent and GoneAlong the blue streams of those who were simplistically glassed, I drag my wooden, empty coffin; it contains only my past.

For the many decades I've lengthened have expanded pain's time; across shallow mountains and beatings I prepare my final climb.

Through harsh mists and soft grasses the journey trembles on; days on end without my voices; alas, I realize they are gone.

Near all abandonment's shelter I rest without ease; my halved demon appears before me; she speaks hellishly in the breeze.

Forgiveness and hallucination she crisply burns in my eyes; I must awaken and continue, 'tis my time to remain wise.

To a judging stream near the gSilent and Gone by =PlethoraFantastique

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Longyearbyen 130131 by ~sandmo

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Shade Of Blue

Shade Of Blue

From a deep slumber...
I have awoken
To this cruel color...
That leaves me haunted

My eyes scream
As I opened the door to my soul
Those thoughts of you start to bleed
Reminding me that you're just a person I used to know
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A dark ocean blue that I once knew
Leaked through my window
It matched this mood
Amplifying the sorrow

Sparking negative energy
It's the secret source of my core
The only element allowing me-
To survive another day, once more

Without a care
I can endure
Without a prayer
I push forward

So let this hue shower
With extreme hatred
Force the nostalgia to devour
And let my heart remain powerless
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Wishing I was

Shade Of Blue

by ~HollowfiedLife

OOOOOOH, morbid indeed. Thoughts haunt us, and the deeper the feelings attached to the person involved, the worse they (the thoughts) s...

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New Years WishI see one light, and that light is her,
with a smile that belongs to the breeze;
I want to spread happiness like her,
but right now I'm a coward;
I'm not even brave enough to put on an
ENORMOUS smile, for no reason at all, like hers.
But what would happen if I were to shine, if we were to shine?
Would anybody need the sun anymore?

The clouds in this room look so white;
I want them to take me somewhere else
where Autumn leaves can rain down anywhere
while I look into her eyes;
those innocent, untouched, widely opened eyes.

New Years Wish

by ~angelichope

I enjoyed reading your wish. I have been the one on the other side of the desired image. It is something like when you arrive at school...

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The Unwanted Dove

The Unwanted Dove

My transformation could not be stopped
A weakened heart is to blame

Remnants of tears are left
I will never be the same again

So tired of everything / These memories of suffering
This is my dark reincarnation / Oh thou have forsaken

I am not your messenger anymore
I'm blind from keeping faith

I no longer recognize a savior
There's no more numbing the pain away
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Lock me up
Destroy the key

I'm not strong enough
To ever be free

So please clip my wings tonight / Never again will I take flight
Allow me to be useless / I yearn to be powerless

It won't be wrong
To take another shot at me

I am done
So cage away this false

The Unwanted Dove

by ~HollowfiedLife

Wow the photo of the dove was on your side. First of all, this speaks from outside and in.... I gleaned a vision of a person who is dar...

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Chemistry Lives

Our minds are glued to skin & bones
Attached to arbitrary forms
Souls borne through green and blue lives
Eyes colored, a chemistry like skies
At different times
Different lives

Chemistry Lives

by *thomasbisbee

Wow, The brevity of the poetry is just like that of life. I like the truth plainly put foke the large vocabulary words... Arbitrary and...

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by ~MzVPain, 5 days, 11 hours ago
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While trying to promote myself, have had no time to pick up a book purely for leisure. So I am recommending a book described by its author as "rustic". I think it may be just what I need! Today the book is free, so feel free to search [link] for The Ribbon Tier by Garrick McFadden [link], now available on Kindle.

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VPAIN's Literary Debut this winter! My name is Victoria but you may call me Mzpain. I will read yours if you read mine, I will post yours if you post mine, I will love yours if you are in it, you may not love mine, or perhaps you see you in it. I try not to rhyme but don't want to repeat. I maintain a village mentality, unavoidable with a litter of three. I like to read more than I eat, and I drink more coffee instead of go to sleep. I work locally at a weekly publication, but I would do the reading of your magical creation. (remember for reviews there is no compensation) As I said call me V- but just don't call me foe. I have learned and I have yearned for bridges I crossed long ago. website to come

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